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THE LIGHTHOUSE BY BEN!
Posted by Atomic Oaks on July 12, 2012 in The Lighthouse
Once upon a time there was a lighthouse that lives on island called Bon. This island was a island very far away from where me or you would live. The whether on this island was always misty. But one extremely misty night in Bon the lighthouse’s light went out!
The lighthouse keeper was petrified because it went out as soon as a ship happened to appear through the mist. So what had to be done was done, he brought his beathon from in his attic outside and set fire to it, making it blaze with fury and reassuring the boat to go the right way, which in this case is to turn round the opposite direction saving the many villagers from the crash!
And now there all safe.
OR ARE THEY!
THE END
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Great work Ben! I like some of the ‘risk taking vocabulary’ you have used such as ‘petrified’ and ‘blaze with fury.’
Your question at the end makes me think; ‘Oh No! What happened next?’
How else could you have started instead of ‘Once upon a time…’