The water tower
The watertower is a 1994 children’s picture book by the author Gary Crew and illustrated by Steven Woolman.
It takes place in Preston Beach, Western Australia.
On a summer afternoon two boys go to a water tower for a swim.
The book has a lot of speech to describe the story, which is an interesting way.
A good word that was changed was summit.
It could have more adverbs and possibly a simile to make it interesting.
This is a strange but interesting book. The book leaves a lot unsaid and that’s what makes you wonder about what’s really happening in the town.
7 out of 10
Billie Baines (: