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100 word challenge Jack.
Posted by Atomic Oaks on June 21, 2012 in Uncategorized
The noise was terrifying but I persevered and continued to trudge through the maze of twisted, gnarled trees. I felt as if they were reaching out, attempting to wrap their branches around my neck and drag me into the dark depths of their thick trunks. Eventually , I ascertained the fact that I was surrounded by ghostly yellow eyes, staring into my eyes and locking them there. All of a sudden, they all leapt out at me. Their stomachs pulsated and wobbled in the wind.
Yellow fangs dripped with venom, threatening to pierce my skin and drink my blood. Pointed claws slashed out suddenly and I met my fate.
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Cool jack like your story
WOW JAck! What an utterly terrifying story – your choice of language had me holding my breath to find out what happened next!I could really picture the scene with descriptions like ‘maze of twisted, gnarled trees’and ‘drag me into the dark depths of their thick trunks.’
You are clearly a very gifted writer who enjoys reading a fair few horror/ vampire stories.
Keep posting, Mrs Ratcliffe
Thank you Mrs Ratcliffe, I really do appreciate your comment and thank you so much for picking my story. Although, I must say I don’t actually read horror stories! I just thought it would be a good genre to write about.
Thanks once again,
Jack, Braishfield Primary school.
Wow i could imagine that in my head the only way to describe it is “Amazing!”
Cheers Luke, I really appreciate it.
Jack.
I liked how you used good adjectives and you could be a winner. You have explained everything well.
Amazing 100WC Jack! Your story created a fantastic image in my head and your use of language is brilliant. You should be very proud of yourself! Keep posting on 100WC.
Miss Sandiford